Monday, May 26, 2008
Peer Review: Aya's Digital Portfolio
Aya's Wiki
I like the blue color, it's catchy and will make me (as a reader) want to surf some more. The video on the homepage is great, it helps the person learn more about you. The pictures are nice, especially the one with Salman. I think having the inspiration document on a different page would be better, as the homepage should be brief, simple and make the viewer want to learn more.
The other pages are completed, good job on finishing them early. they all have the artifacts and reflections, as well as documents out of a hyperlink which is usually very dull. I think the most interesting page you built was the Arts page, a video is always interesting, the one you did for music was a nice addition. The other pages were all pretty good, but not as good as the music one.
Overall I liked the portfolio, but remember to put your name somewhere on the homepage, and not in the personal statement only, as sometimes people might not be bothered to look at it. Random-7 is a nice name, but i think it should have been something with more informative things like your school username etc. But it was nice reading it, the video was also pretty good.
Here's a link to the Wiki: Aya's wiki
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